Thursday, February 12, 2009

Writing

For writing.
We had to compose a story that could have only 50-60 words. Either mom or we could pick the subject to write about. It is harder than you think to limit yourself to only 50-60 words. On my first try I had 75-80 words. I had to cram it down several times until I finally got to the word limit.

Here is mine:

Sleep over at Sam's
Nestled under the covers we whispered...
Trying to retain our exploding laughter.
The room was sleepy -
we were about the
only lively things in it.
With each expression we spoke..
we achieved a new volume.
One subject changing to another...
Until suddenly we heard the door creek open.
“Go to bed!” mom whispered insistently.
We drifted off.

4 comments:

  1. OOOOOOooooooo...... This is soo good!! I am very impressed. Love and miss you bunches.
    Aunt Holly

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  2. Wow Sarah that is great!!! Sorry that I did not comment sooner our computer has been running slow so I have been having a hard time checking other blogs. But I just love that poem. :)
    Samantha

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  3. that is great!! reminds me when i was little!! way to go!!

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  4. Great story Sarah! (I love your new blog design- but maybe it isn't new, because I haven't stopped by your blog in a while:)

    Natalie P.

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